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3/22/2006

The Gravedigger Revamped

I fill up the hearts at night
The withering blood-red pools of fright,
Where you stand is holy ground,
The ground on which your father was found.

In the dark there was a cry,
A woman, some, thought it was by,
But when the guards of night watch came,
It was your father, just the same.

From the east, there was a light,
Much to many peoples delight;
A firework show to promote a grin,
The killer got away in the bright shining din.

I fill up the hearts at night,
Hoping no one will give a bewildering rite,
I let them in on the terrible news,
And from then I collect the overdue dues.

From the oustide of my home there came
A resounding crash, a timultinous flame,
I rounded aside to see his face,
In my window, near my place.

Terrified and cooking through
I sought the fire, and hence slew,
The man outside made his way,
Through my field, his chuckles gay.

I fill up the hearts at night,
With dirt, and grass, an uncanny sight,
What, from me, did this man want?
What do I have to make him hunt?

Perhaps it was the trinket I stole,
Perhaps it meant I held his soul,
Atop my mantle this trinket lies,
Every night it squeaks and cries:

Gravedigger...Gravedigger...Gravedigger...

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

This is GREAT!

I love the second stanza. The poem is very fun to read aloud because of its simple, easy-to-follow rhythm.

In the stanza before the last, is hunt supposed to be haunt? Because all previous end-line rhyme would indicate that it should rhyme there, too.

I like the reoccurence of things in the poem, the order in which things (nouns) reappear.

Your very advanced level of language is so much different than my own, it's so exactly beautiful in one.

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